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polina_oliv'den mesaj - English

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  • In October, 2011, to the University of Dresden in Germany, I had the chance to assist a course in International Business.
  • This cours has me so much interested and passionate whom I wanted to change of course of study When I went back to Russia, I continued my studies of Psychology of the organisation however wish to study the world of International business did not leave my mind.
  • During my license Psychology of the Organisation, I studied disciplines such as the occupational psychology, legal, political, management, conflict as well as administrative consultation.
  • These disciplines allowed me to acquire many knowledge and have me aidee to develop my professional and personal qualities.I am persuaded that this acquired knowledge will be also useful to me in training and success of this master Intercultural Negotiation.
  • My friends and my family describe me as a dynamic, motivated, reliable, responsible and persevering.
  • I show a big capacity of organisation and of adaptation.
  • Some years ago I was captain of a basketball team this experience shaped my character, helped me to take confidence in myself and has develop my team spirit.
  • Grace in my perseverance in my job I got in Germany, a grant for the development of my research project .
  • This project consisted in establishing a comparison between German and Russian students concerning their dependency in relation to social networks. .
  • This project was brilliantly led and was an opportunity to improve my English.
  • Concerning foreign languages, I have good competences oral and written in English and I am enthralled by the French language in recent years, that is why I wanted to come in France to study this language.
  • It is in October, 2012, within ISEFE that I began studying French.
  • A student of master 2 informed me on the master Intercultural Negotiation offered in your University.
  • Programme offered as well as given lessons seem to correspond to my professional plan.
  • I would like to work in a multinational company as Commercial of International Communication.
  • This master would allow me to acquire knowledge which will be necessary to me to include and to understand different cultures, as for example that of persons with whom I will be led to work over the years.
  • In January I went to the University with my friend of master 2 and I met Mr. Raphael Dornier with whom I could exchange some words.
  • This last said to me that my profile could be interesting for this master.
  • I was delighted to learn it because to include this master would be the realisation of my dream Having the ability to work, motivation and will necessary for the success of this master, I solicit your benevolence regarding my request for my admission to the Master 1 Intercultural Negotiation.
  • I stay at your disposal for a possible maintenance, and ask you to agree, Madam, Mister, to the expression of my respectful feelings

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    • This cours has me so much interested and passionate whom I wanted to change of course of study When I went back to Russia, I continued my studies of Psychology of the organisation however wish to study the world of International business did not leave my mind.
      Şİmdi oyla!
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    • During my license Psychology of the Organisation, I studied disciplines such as the occupational psychology, legal, political, management, conflict as well as administrative consultation.
      Şİmdi oyla!
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    • These disciplines allowed me to acquire many knowledge and have me aidee to develop my professional and personal qualities.I am persuaded that this acquired knowledge will be also useful to me in training and success of this master Intercultural Negotiation.
      Şİmdi oyla!
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    • Some years ago I was captain of a basketball team this experience shaped my character, helped me to take confidence in myself and has develop my team spirit.
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    • This project consisted in establishing a comparison between German and Russian students concerning their dependency in relation to social networks. .
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    • Concerning foreign languages, I have good competences oral and written in English and I am enthralled by the French language in recent years, that is why I wanted to come in France to study this language.
      Şİmdi oyla!
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    • This master would allow me to acquire knowledge which will be necessary to me to include and to understand different cultures, as for example that of persons with whom I will be led to work over the years.
      Şİmdi oyla!
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    • I was delighted to learn it because to include this master would be the realisation of my dream Having the ability to work, motivation and will necessary for the success of this master, I solicit your benevolence regarding my request for my admission to the Master 1 Intercultural Negotiation.
      Şİmdi oyla!
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