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It's Important!
Hello everyone!
First of all I'd like to show you a little bit about my knowledge in English.
Of course I need a lot of improvements and I hope I can find here people that really will help on it.
I have 27 years old and I'm feeling completely excited about my future and projects I'm building everyday.
If posible helping me to get better English because it's really important for my career and so on.

RafiuskyMarch 2014Vote now!
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PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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- It's Important!
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- Hello everyone!
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Sentence 2
- First of all I'd like to show you a little bit about my knowledge in English.
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Sentence 3
- Of course I need a lot of improvements and I hope I can find here people that really will help on it.
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- I have 27 years old and I'm feeling completely excited about my future and projects I'm building everyday.
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Sentence 5
- If posible helping me to get better English because it's really important for my career and so on.
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