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My life
I want to tell you about my life.
I am engaged in ball dances and I like it.
I think that i can`t live without it.
Every week i with my partner go to the competition in Moscow. We dance good.
When we were at ours last competition in Moscow we took the third place.
I was so happy.
Please correct my text if i did mistakes!

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- My life
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- I want to tell you about my life.
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문장 2
- I am engaged in ball dances and I like it.
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- I think that i can`t live without it.
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- Every week i with my partner go to the competition in Moscow. We dance good.
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- When we were at ours last competition in Moscow we took the third place.
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- I was so happy.
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- Please correct my text if i did mistakes!
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