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從gleidy來的文本 - English

  • a letter to a friend (hope to be corrected this time!)

  • I’m very glad you have finally decided to visit my country!I didn’t understand how long you will stay.But if you stay for an entire month that would be perfect!I would have time for making to know some special places (for me) of this city.Arrive to my apartment is very easy, it costs just a ticket bus.
  • Don’t worry.You’ll have ask for Line 73 since Linate Airport and get off at 3th stop, otherwise I could go to take you, if you arrive around 19.00.Here the weather is crazy.When you’ll get here will be spring, days sunny and rainy too!So, take your t-shirts and an umbrella.Let me know when you come exactly here and how long, just so I will can organize my time and maybe ask some free days at work.I would like to come to Airport for you, try to come after 19.00hr.Hoping hear you soon (... ?)

请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English

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  • 句子 1
    • I’m very glad you have finally decided to visit my country!I didn’t understand how long you will stay.But if you stay for an entire month that would be perfect!I would have time for making to know some special places (for me) of this city.Arrive to my apartment is very easy, it costs just a ticket bus.
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    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
  • 句子 2
    • Don’t worry.You’ll have ask for Line 73 since Linate Airport and get off at 3th stop, otherwise I could go to take you, if you arrive around 19.00.Here the weather is crazy.When you’ll get here will be spring, days sunny and rainy too!So, take your t-shirts and an umbrella.Let me know when you come exactly here and how long, just so I will can organize my time and maybe ask some free days at work.I would like to come to Airport for you, try to come after 19.00hr.Hoping hear you soon (... ?)
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2