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  • Nylon life

  • In the past i had done many english lessons.
  • I remember one Topic: Nylon life.
  • Perhaps somebody never heard that word before.
  • Well i hope this time i don´t go completely off the subject.
  • Ok, back to the subject.
  • We discuss about London, and New York, by the way i think those cities are an good example for Nylon life.
  • I´am sure everyone knows the picadilly Circus in London and the Broadway in New York ?
  • Millions of Tourists, Banker, Wall Street wizards Glamour Yellow cabs, Starbuck, hop on hop off bus.
  • That´s are naturally parts of New York and London but they don´t tell us about the real life, or should i say culture ?
  • My personal Opinion don´t watch to many TV or don´t believe some Advertising from travel agencies.
  • Please allow me a concluding remark.
  • Nylon life is a Problem of all cosmopolitan cities.What do you think about?

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