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hi
hi my name is evelyn and i would like to practice my english with someone!
are there any one here?

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- hi
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句子 1
- hi my name is evelyn and i would like to practice my english with someone!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- are there any one here?
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2