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  • At first sight he seemed to be in some kind of trouble but may be after all it just looked like it, in fact he was in charge of the situation which was kind of surprising having in mind that he wasn’t the type of person who would easily handle some verbal battling with strangers.
  • And the more he got involved the more bravery he seemed to obtain and use it wisely against the citizen who was supposed to be responsible for that argument happened just a few minutes ago.
  • All started when both as they were standing up next to each other in a bus full of people, suddenly the driver jumped on the brakes and the gentleman pushed Trevor with elbow in the stomach totally unexpected and a bit of unnecessarily but that was just the first part of it.
  • The real problem was hiding not quite in the described above rough movement but in the following attitude came by the same “elbow” person who turned to Trevor in an angry manner with the words: “What the hell are you doing?
  • Can’t you see there’s people around ya?
  • “ - and this is how it all began.

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    • At first sight he seemed to be in some kind of trouble but may be after all it just looked like it, in fact he was in charge of the situation which was kind of surprising having in mind that he wasn’t the type of person who would easily handle some verbal battling with strangers.
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    • And the more he got involved the more bravery he seemed to obtain and use it wisely against the citizen who was supposed to be responsible for that argument happened just a few minutes ago.
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    • All started when both as they were standing up next to each other in a bus full of people, suddenly the driver jumped on the brakes and the gentleman pushed Trevor with elbow in the stomach totally unexpected and a bit of unnecessarily but that was just the first part of it.
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    • The real problem was hiding not quite in the described above rough movement but in the following attitude came by the same “elbow” person who turned to Trevor in an angry manner with the words: “What the hell are you doing?
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