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Happy birthday to me
Dear relative!
- thank you for the present, that you had given me.
New mobile phone is a good idea for gift but I will be happy even if you present to me just words and some love and warm.
Most importantly - not a gift, but attention.
- it was so memorable because I appreciate every gift and token from you.
- I received for my birthday a lot of books and cosmetics too.

kulebakaApril 2014투표하세요!
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- Happy birthday to me
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 제목
문장 1
- Dear relative!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- - thank you for the present, that you had given me.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- New mobile phone is a good idea for gift but I will be happy even if you present to me just words and some love and warm.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- Most importantly - not a gift, but attention.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- - it was so memorable because I appreciate every gift and token from you.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- - I received for my birthday a lot of books and cosmetics too.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6