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Văn bản từ Gandziar - English

  • Just a few words about a game

  • Recently I played in awesome computer game name Assassins Creed.
  • This game is about a war beetwen the Templars and the Assassins and trought the machine called the Animus a main hero Desmond Miles can back became one of his ancestors.
  • In first part of this game he becames the Altair an assassin who is just doing commends from his master Al-Mualim.
  • Both sides try to find a piece of Eden an apple which is indeed remarkable, it has a knowledge about future and another mistical things.
  • Oh, i forgot to say that the action is in 12th century.
  • Thought the game Altair or rather Desmond in Altair's skin killed a lot of enemy troops in many spectacular ways.
  • With hiding blades (which are complately marvelous) he can kill everyone, besides the blades he has also cool sword, throwing knives and awesome armor.
  • At the end of the game unfortunally he has to kill his own master becouse he thinhs that the apple possessed him. It's shame.
  • That is just a short story about this game, if someone played on it know that a story is very expanded, and with clean conscience i can recommened it to all of you.
  • I hope that I wasn't made a lot of mistakes.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

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  • câu 1
  • câu 2
    • This game is about a war beetwen the Templars and the Assassins and trought the machine called the Animus a main hero Desmond Miles can back became one of his ancestors.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • In first part of this game he becames the Altair an assassin who is just doing commends from his master Al-Mualim.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • Both sides try to find a piece of Eden an apple which is indeed remarkable, it has a knowledge about future and another mistical things.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
  • câu 6
    • Thought the game Altair or rather Desmond in Altair's skin killed a lot of enemy troops in many spectacular ways.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • With hiding blades (which are complately marvelous) he can kill everyone, besides the blades he has also cool sword, throwing knives and awesome armor.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • At the end of the game unfortunally he has to kill his own master becouse he thinhs that the apple possessed him. It's shame.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • That is just a short story about this game, if someone played on it know that a story is very expanded, and with clean conscience i can recommened it to all of you.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10