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Story about me
I studied on engineer builder but did not work engineer.
I work at home, my work commerce sphere.
I have internet shop.

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- Story about me
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句子 1
- I studied on engineer builder but did not work engineer.
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句子 2
- I work at home, my work commerce sphere.
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句子 3
- I have internet shop.
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