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My trip to West Coast in USA
My last trip was West Coast in Usa.
It was in April last year (2013).
My friends and i were in a lot of places of California State.
In Los Angeles we visit to Beverly Hills, kodak theatre, stars street, universial studios, six flags magic mountain....
We was very happy, and our friendship was more strong after twenty five days together.
When my text are corrected by you then i will continue to write about my travel.
:) Regards from Spain! Felipe

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- My last trip was West Coast in Usa.
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- It was in April last year (2013).
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- My friends and i were in a lot of places of California State.
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- In Los Angeles we visit to Beverly Hills, kodak theatre, stars street, universial studios, six flags magic mountain....
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- We was very happy, and our friendship was more strong after twenty five days together.
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- :) Regards from Spain! Felipe
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