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Democracy
Now, it´s Time for another Analysis.
To find a good Beginnig is the most important step for a Story right ?
Many Polyglot members live in a democratic State, or should i say they think they live ?
Ok, i have no right to judge about different Countries in the whole world.
But, i was educated to have an critical Opinion about Political Systems, by the way iam not agree with all decisions of Germany.
The Point is i think we lost more and more Democracy in the whole world and iam really be worry about it.
For my part i will never accept those insidious loss of human rights.
Before i finish, open-mindedness is simply an Illusion.
So Nice Weekend Folks.

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- Democracy
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- Now, it´s Time for another Analysis.
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- To find a good Beginnig is the most important step for a Story right ?
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- Many Polyglot members live in a democratic State, or should i say they think they live ?
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- Ok, i have no right to judge about different Countries in the whole world.
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Sentence 5
- But, i was educated to have an critical Opinion about Political Systems, by the way iam not agree with all decisions of Germany.
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- The Point is i think we lost more and more Democracy in the whole world and iam really be worry about it.
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- For my part i will never accept those insidious loss of human rights.
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- Before i finish, open-mindedness is simply an Illusion.
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- So Nice Weekend Folks.
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