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  • Laia's show

  • Yesterday I went to Laia Vehi's show, in Thelonious bar (Near of Bellavista).
  • I went with a friend called Emi, she is studying singing.
  • Laia Vehi is a spanish singer who became famous in 2012 when she appeared on a TV show called "El numero uno" singing "si tu no vuelves" with famous spanish singer Miguel Bosé.
  • Sincé that day, Laia had been recording many songs and yesterday was her first show in Chile.
  • She came to our country, because she has a chilean friend (who is my friend too) and she took advantage of being here and play her performance.
  • We (Emi and me) liked her voice, she is so talented, she played the piano very good and she covered singers like Ayo, Amaral and Regina Spektor.
  • Sincerely we loved her show.
  • The only thing that I disliked of this night, was we had to pay for enter into the bar! it was no expensive but i disliked... anyway, I think that it was an incredible and a perfect night!
  • It's a Laia's photo, playing guitar and singing and another photo of Emi and me yesterday!

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    • Laia Vehi is a spanish singer who became famous in 2012 when she appeared on a TV show called "El numero uno" singing "si tu no vuelves" with famous spanish singer Miguel Bosé.
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    • She came to our country, because she has a chilean friend (who is my friend too) and she took advantage of being here and play her performance.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • We (Emi and me) liked her voice, she is so talented, she played the piano very good and she covered singers like Ayo, Amaral and Regina Spektor.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • The only thing that I disliked of this night, was we had to pay for enter into the bar! it was no expensive but i disliked... anyway, I think that it was an incredible and a perfect night!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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