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I am a slave
I am a slave of my emotions.
They are my bloody enemies.
They are a reasons why I am is so shy.
Sometimes i want to change my life, but then i think about future.
What will happen if i do something?
Maybe all people in a whole world will laughing above me? No!
Laugh it is not my ghastly nightmare.
Really, i am afraid that my favourite peoples, half of my heart will dissapointed if i will do mistakes

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- I am a slave of my emotions.
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- They are my bloody enemies.
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- They are a reasons why I am is so shy.
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- Sometimes i want to change my life, but then i think about future.
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- What will happen if i do something?
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- Maybe all people in a whole world will laughing above me? No!
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- Laugh it is not my ghastly nightmare.
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- Really, i am afraid that my favourite peoples, half of my heart will dissapointed if i will do mistakes
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