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My pets
I love animals very much!
I had a lot of pets for this reason.
I had two cats, chinchilla, guinea pig and rats.
My cats eaten rats, and my guinea pig died, becouse i forgot about it.
I presented my chinchilla to my brother, becouse his chinchilla died.
Now i have onlu two cats.
Neither animal could not survive with my lovely cats.

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- My pets
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- I love animals very much!
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- I had a lot of pets for this reason.
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- I had two cats, chinchilla, guinea pig and rats.
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- My cats eaten rats, and my guinea pig died, becouse i forgot about it.
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- I presented my chinchilla to my brother, becouse his chinchilla died.
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- Now i have onlu two cats.
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- Neither animal could not survive with my lovely cats.
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