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Hi!
Hi!
My name is Tasha!
I am from Russia.
I want as best as possible to learn English.
My English is poor.
I am a student at the university 3rd year.
My specialty - Information Systems in Economics.
In my free time I go to the gym.
I'd be happy to talk with you.

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- Hi!
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- My name is Tasha!
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- I am from Russia.
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- I want as best as possible to learn English.
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- My English is poor.
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- I am a student at the university 3rd year.
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- My specialty - Information Systems in Economics.
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- In my free time I go to the gym.
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- I'd be happy to talk with you.
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