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Help for my presentation
Hello.
My name is Mary, I'm 18 years old and I live in France.
I'm looking for penfriends around my age to exchange about cultures.
I'm looking for especially Japanese, Chinese, Greek, English and Spanish friends.
Morevoer I can give french lessons, if it is possible once or twice per week, if you are interested message me!
By the way I'd like to learn Greek and Japanese and I'm currently learning English and Spanish at school, therefore It would be great if I could learn with you!
I'm here also to find good friends and have fun, in other words I'm looking for a long frienship.
So, I hope we could get on well!
Don't hesitate to message me!

标题
- Help for my presentation
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hello.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- My name is Mary, I'm 18 years old and I live in France.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I'm looking for penfriends around my age to exchange about cultures.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I'm looking for especially Japanese, Chinese, Greek, English and Spanish friends.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- Morevoer I can give french lessons, if it is possible once or twice per week, if you are interested message me!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- By the way I'd like to learn Greek and Japanese and I'm currently learning English and Spanish at school, therefore It would be great if I could learn with you!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- I'm here also to find good friends and have fun, in other words I'm looking for a long frienship.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- So, I hope we could get on well!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8
句子 9
- Don't hesitate to message me!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9