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Tears Of Life
For meeting for parting If it didn't bring us days, will bring us dreams If it didn't bring us dreams, will bring us memories And splendor with hope and the meeting.
If your ship docked on the shore of memories make me one of the passengers

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句子 1
- For meeting for parting If it didn't bring us days, will bring us dreams If it didn't bring us dreams, will bring us memories And splendor with hope and the meeting.
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- If your ship docked on the shore of memories make me one of the passengers
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