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Hello Everyone ~
Hello I'm french and I speak a little English, I would like to learn more things in English, someone can teach me English?
I can help you with the French! ^^

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- Hello Everyone ~
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句子 1
- Hello I'm french and I speak a little English, I would like to learn more things in English, someone can teach me English?
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I can help you with the French! ^^
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2