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Hi everyone,
today i am a little depressed, i don't know how can i solve my problem with english.
i want to write in english without mistakes.
i do my best to improve my english but i feel that i am in the same place. nothing has changed.
perhaps i need for some advice from one who has experience in this.
these days i am completely confused.
sometime you saw me reading a book in english sometime you saw me hearing for something in english.
and this site it's really great.
but it needs for attend people. it's close to be disused.

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- today i am a little depressed, i don't know how can i solve my problem with english.
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- i want to write in english without mistakes.
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- i do my best to improve my english but i feel that i am in the same place. nothing has changed.
  투표하세요!
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- perhaps i need for some advice from one who has experience in this.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
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- these days i am completely confused.
  투표하세요!
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- sometime you saw me reading a book in english sometime you saw me hearing for something in english.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
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- and this site it's really great.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
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- but it needs for attend people. it's close to be disused.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8