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a bad day
today is a bad day for me.
my japanese text wasn't past.
and i'm so afriad that it will make my interview won't pass too.
so , i felt unhappy today.

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句子 1
- today is a bad day for me.
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句子 2
- my japanese text wasn't past.
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句子 3
- and i'm so afriad that it will make my interview won't pass too.
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- so , i felt unhappy today.
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