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  • Today Is A Day Very Annoying

  • Today is a day very annoying for me.
  • The last, when I went to hospital to sift work in a room post partum maternity, I meet with a room head to consultation about paper nursing care my patient untill four times.
  • When I came there room she always ignore me, whereas I've contract time with her before and she told me that she accept that and agree.
  • Finally I decide to wait her she finish with her job and after I wait her, she treat me so bad and angry to me and correction my paper so hard and streak my paper.
  • Suddently without comment, she stand and go without ask me.
  • This is the first a lectuler head room in this hospital treat me so bad like that.
  • And this is a my study to be patient with someone like that and I know self that as a student should accept all treatment to a lectuler to get a value to study.

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    • The last, when I went to hospital to sift work in a room post partum maternity, I meet with a room head to consultation about paper nursing care my patient untill four times.
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    • When I came there room she always ignore me, whereas I've contract time with her before and she told me that she accept that and agree.
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    • Finally I decide to wait her she finish with her job and after I wait her, she treat me so bad and angry to me and correction my paper so hard and streak my paper.
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    • And this is a my study to be patient with someone like that and I know self that as a student should accept all treatment to a lectuler to get a value to study.
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