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  • About myself and my family

  • My name is Dasha. I'm 16.
  • I'm fond of dancing, drawing and I play volleyball.
  • I study in the 10 class.
  • Through 1 year I will get in University in Moscow.
  • I want will become the Architect.
  • I hope that I will.
  • I have a family.
  • My family consist in a mother, a father and a brother.
  • Mother name is Luda.
  • She is ingenue.
  • In free time she occupy with garden.
  • Father name is Vova.
  • He work at the office.
  • He as love garden as mom.
  • Also he like animals especially the dogs, the cats and the rabbits.
  • Us merrily always.
  • Also I have a brother.
  • Him name is Pasha.
  • He is computer programer.
  • He live in Yekaterinburg.
  • Pasha crossed from us 1 year ago.

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