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POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ TERAZ!Niepoprawione

Text from linny123 - English

  • My last internship and the difficulty I met

  • My last internship was to characterize and model thermal and optical properties of the lamp which is used in automobiles.
  • The difficulty of this project was to model the change of temperature on the surfaces (interior and exterior) of the bulb.
  • This industry project had had lasted 3 years and no one had succeeded in this part.
  • After I joined this team, I continued to study the examples in the website, watched their teaching videos and exchanged the ideas with others.
  • At the beginning, I supposed that the bulb is a surface (has no thickness) and made a simple model under the help of other engineers.
  • Then, I succeeded to prove that the bulb is a thin optical material which means the difference of temperature in interior surface and exterior surface could be ignored.
  • This difficulty was solved simply and unexpectedly.
  • So that this project could be continued and my work has been (or will be) published in key Engineering magazine.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
    • My last internship was to characterize and model thermal and optical properties of the lamp which is used in automobiles.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
    • The difficulty of this project was to model the change of temperature on the surfaces (interior and exterior) of the bulb.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
    • After I joined this team, I continued to study the examples in the website, watched their teaching videos and exchanged the ideas with others.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • At the beginning, I supposed that the bulb is a surface (has no thickness) and made a simple model under the help of other engineers.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
    • Then, I succeeded to prove that the bulb is a thin optical material which means the difference of temperature in interior surface and exterior surface could be ignored.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8