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I role in your company
As a Chinese student who obtained a Master degree in France, I desire to inject my knowledge and background to your group.
I hope that after this graduate program, I could join your energy department and continue to improve my work skills and experience.
Several years later, I wish to be one of the leaders in China zone, increase the energy market share and improve also the economic development in China, realize a win-win situation.

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- As a Chinese student who obtained a Master degree in France, I desire to inject my knowledge and background to your group.
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- I hope that after this graduate program, I could join your energy department and continue to improve my work skills and experience.
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- Several years later, I wish to be one of the leaders in China zone, increase the energy market share and improve also the economic development in China, realize a win-win situation.
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