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AUTA KORJAAMAAN NYT!korjaamaton

Text from whiterose1 - English

  • Is it difficult to forget?

  • Does one mistake make a person bad for ever ?
  • The story began, with two friends walked in the desert.
  • During the journey the two friends argued then one of them smote another on his face.
  • The man how was hit on his face and suffered but without saying a single word, he wrote in the sand :" Today my best friend hit me on my face" The two friends continued walking until they found an oasis, so they decided to swim.
  • The man who was hit on his face hung in quicksand and began to sink, but a friend grabbed him and saved him from drowning.
  • And after his friend saved him from the death, he wrote on a piece of rock:" Today my best friend saved my life".
  • His friend asked: why in the first time when I hit you you wrote in the sand and now when I rescue you wrote on the rock.
  • He replied: when one of us hurts we should write what he did on the sand where winds of tolerance it could erase.
  • But when one of us does something good we have to write what he did on the rock where there is not any kind of wind that can wipe them.

AUTA KORJAAMAAN JOKAINEN LAUSE! - English

  • Otsikko
  • Lause 1
  • Lause 2
  • Lause 3
  • Lause 4
    • The man how was hit on his face and suffered but without saying a single word, he wrote in the sand :" Today my best friend hit me on my face" The two friends continued walking until they found an oasis, so they decided to swim.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4
  • Lause 5
    • The man who was hit on his face hung in quicksand and began to sink, but a friend grabbed him and saved him from drowning.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5
  • Lause 6
    • And after his friend saved him from the death, he wrote on a piece of rock:" Today my best friend saved my life".
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 6
  • Lause 7
    • His friend asked: why in the first time when I hit you you wrote in the sand and now when I rescue you wrote on the rock.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 7
  • Lause 8
    • He replied: when one of us hurts we should write what he did on the sand where winds of tolerance it could erase.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 8
  • Lause 9
    • But when one of us does something good we have to write what he did on the rock where there is not any kind of wind that can wipe them.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 9