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Help =)
I'm learning English, but sometimes I do some mistakes.
My English tutor adviced me more read in English.
I don't know what to read =( Maybe it wil be some books or articles or something else.
I'm afraid to beging read some text which can be with mistakes.
What can you advice me?

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