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Text from Rita165 - English

  • The importance of fashion in teenagers' lives.

  • A lot of teenagers nowadays are very concerned about their appearance.
  • They want to stand out from the crowd, express their personality and make a good impression.
  • Sometimes fashion allows teenagers to reach an understanding between peers.
  • Teenagers are trying to find their own individual style but sometimes it seems that almost all of them dressed alike.
  • They wear tight pants of bright color, frayed jeans, sneakers or shoes of famous brands, shirts and T-shirts with unusual print.
  • Also a lot of youth movement can determine teenager's fashion.
  • It is believed that the more expensive and more popular clothing brand the better it looks.
  • Many fashion brands use different tools for sales promotion.
  • Modern teens become a victim of advertising in magazines and TV or in the streets.
  • Many young girls want to look like top models, they want to have large wardrobe, fashion for them it is the way to express themselves.
  • As for me I do not follow fashion trends and try to choose clothing that suits me more.
  • I have never had any special preferences in clothes.
  • As many teens of my age group I like to wear jeans and bright hoodies.
  • I used to hate wearing dresses and skirts before but now when I got older I started to love them.
  • I usually wear neutral colors like: white, black, gray and light blue, but I also like bright colors.
  • My style of clothing can tell you that I am very conservative person but at the same time I want to emphasize my individuality.
  • In my opinion it is impossible to follow fashion all the time and spending your time and money at the shopping centers.
  • Fashion is important but still I try to put my energy into doing something more interesting.

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