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  • May 3rd.

  • Today is Saturday, May 3rd.
  • Now, I come back home, I went to the university for the Taekwondo class, I feel so so glad in the University, happy in the city where I don't have borned, I feel so good meet new people, new culture, new friends, new experiences.
  • But after to come back home, I feel so sad, 'cause I'm living with two witches.
  • After noon, I called my father 'cause, is her birthdays, and my aunt make me a ugly face, when I turn off my cell phone, she came back and said to me: make your bed, eat the breakfast, don't leave anything in the plate.
  • Well, they are going to walk the dog and I can shout and feel happy, but when I was washing the clothes, I must up the stairs and hang it but when I went down, I've fallen and double my left ankle.

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    • Now, I come back home, I went to the university for the Taekwondo class, I feel so so glad in the University, happy in the city where I don't have borned, I feel so good meet new people, new culture, new friends, new experiences.
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    • After noon, I called my father 'cause, is her birthdays, and my aunt make me a ugly face, when I turn off my cell phone, she came back and said to me: make your bed, eat the breakfast, don't leave anything in the plate.
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    • Well, they are going to walk the dog and I can shout and feel happy, but when I was washing the clothes, I must up the stairs and hang it but when I went down, I've fallen and double my left ankle.
      투표하세요!
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