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A Kid
when I were a kid I used to play football with a boys . it was so amusing.
I were flying like a birds, there were no restrictions.
just when I returned to home, I always found my mother at a door. she was waiting for me with a frown look.
When I saw her, I immediately looked to my clothe.
It was so dirty.
In that moment I knew that she would banish me.
but it didn't matter, after all I got what I wanted.
Time go faster as we get older without feeling.
And here we are I can't even remember their names.

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- A Kid
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- when I were a kid I used to play football with a boys . it was so amusing.
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- I were flying like a birds, there were no restrictions.
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문장 3
- just when I returned to home, I always found my mother at a door. she was waiting for me with a frown look.
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- When I saw her, I immediately looked to my clothe.
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문장 5
- It was so dirty.
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- In that moment I knew that she would banish me.
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문장 7
- but it didn't matter, after all I got what I wanted.
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- Time go faster as we get older without feeling.
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문장 9
- And here we are I can't even remember their names.
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