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I worked as commercial consultant in the financial sector.
My responsabilities ( or activities ?) were: call portfolio clients and potential clients.
looking for companies whit establish partnership (or collaboration ?)

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- I worked as commercial consultant in the financial sector.
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- My responsabilities ( or activities ?) were: call portfolio clients and potential clients.
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- looking for companies whit establish partnership (or collaboration ?)
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