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Two days ago, a very famous politician visited my small suburbia.
she is very renown, because she represents the "Front National".
This is a extremist and racist political party.
Marine Le pen, the politician, has been criticized in my city, and some people throw eggs and tomatoes on her !
I totally hate this party, because they want a France without immigration and without foreign people.
Personally, I think that multiculturalism is something very rewarding for everybody.
Moreover, I was born abroad, so I don't think that immigration is something bad.

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- Two days ago, a very famous politician visited my small suburbia.
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- she is very renown, because she represents the "Front National".
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- This is a extremist and racist political party.
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- Marine Le pen, the politician, has been criticized in my city, and some people throw eggs and tomatoes on her !
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- I totally hate this party, because they want a France without immigration and without foreign people.
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- Personally, I think that multiculturalism is something very rewarding for everybody.
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- Moreover, I was born abroad, so I don't think that immigration is something bad.
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