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Tekst fra Kaezon - English

  • My Hobby

  • My favourite hobby is go to the Stadium- I think that all in the classroom knows my favourite chilean football team, well, is Universidad de Chile.
  • My hobby has directly relation with this because my hobby is Go to the stadium to see play my favourite team.
  • My presentation is divided into four topics Story: When i was a children my father brought me and my brother to the stadium but no much times because was very dangerous fot the “barras bravas” or “Hooligans”.
  • After, when I was in 8th with my brother I began go to the stadium more often.
  • I requested money out of the stadium and my routine all weekends is see my team.
  • Friends: When i travel for see my team, and when i went and go to the stadium, I have known very much people that now are my friends, in other communes of Santiago and in other cities in Regions of Chile as Iquique, Los Andes, La Calera, Rancagua, Talca, Concepcion, Talcahuano, Temuco, Puerto Montt, etc. Travels: For this reason, my friends, i have travelled to their cities following my team, knowing new friends, visiting my friends, I have good luck for my friends, i am knowing new cities, new places, new stadiums, follow the team and know more people is very addictive, is an incurable illness.
  • Importance: For me, my friends are very important for my social life, if they share with me the same passion is other reason to love their.
  • The mayority of my friends are “bullangueros”.

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    • My favourite hobby is go to the Stadium- I think that all in the classroom knows my favourite chilean football team, well, is Universidad de Chile.
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    • My presentation is divided into four topics Story: When i was a children my father brought me and my brother to the stadium but no much times because was very dangerous fot the “barras bravas” or “Hooligans”.
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    • Friends: When i travel for see my team, and when i went and go to the stadium, I have known very much people that now are my friends, in other communes of Santiago and in other cities in Regions of Chile as Iquique, Los Andes, La Calera, Rancagua, Talca, Concepcion, Talcahuano, Temuco, Puerto Montt, etc. Travels: For this reason, my friends, i have travelled to their cities following my team, knowing new friends, visiting my friends, I have good luck for my friends, i am knowing new cities, new places, new stadiums, follow the team and know more people is very addictive, is an incurable illness.
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    • Importance: For me, my friends are very important for my social life, if they share with me the same passion is other reason to love their.
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