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Today in my countre a great day!
our grandfathers and grandfathers had won the war 69 years back.
Today in my town will be a parade, "Victory" ("Победы").
I and my mother to go the parade and exhibition of retro cars.I am sad because there are few veterans.After 5 years, they will not be quite :( Night will salute.
My brother goes with us.

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- Today in my countre a great day!
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- our grandfathers and grandfathers had won the war 69 years back.
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- I and my mother to go the parade and exhibition of retro cars.I am sad because there are few veterans.After 5 years, they will not be quite :( Night will salute.
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- My brother goes with us.
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