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I'm new!
Hello everybody!
I'm new in this website, I would like to learn English it's very important for me.
Currently I'm traveling for meet people and speak English each day, even with this method it's hard to learn an other language.
That the reason why I've subscribe in Polyglot Club, I want speak an write with different person around the word.
It seems like very fun and interesting.
Have a nice day, Bye

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- I'm new!
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문장 1
- Hello everybody!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I'm new in this website, I would like to learn English it's very important for me.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- Currently I'm traveling for meet people and speak English each day, even with this method it's hard to learn an other language.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- That the reason why I've subscribe in Polyglot Club, I want speak an write with different person around the word.
  투표하세요!
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문장 5
- It seems like very fun and interesting.
  투표하세요!
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- Have a nice day, Bye
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