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My holiday
Dear kate Thaks for your postcard from Egypt.Did you visit the Great Pyramid in the end?
Or did you spend whole day at the beach?
I have never been in Egypt but my best friend said that is one of the most amazing countries around the world.
I would like to viset egypt too

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- Dear kate Thaks for your postcard from Egypt.Did you visit the Great Pyramid in the end?
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- Or did you spend whole day at the beach?
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- I have never been in Egypt but my best friend said that is one of the most amazing countries around the world.
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- I would like to viset egypt too
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