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  • my cover letter

  • I am a graduate from UPMC 2013 with a Master’s degree in Science of Engineering, specialty in Energy and Mechanics.
  • I am interested in the opportunities at {company name} and received this information from {}.
  • Two years study in France has given me exceptional opportunities to broaden my vision through a wide-variety of courses and different culture.
  • Throughout my research studies, I applied these knowledge in the projects taking during this education (such as Compressed Air Energy Storage, ventilation system and offshore energy).
  • More importantly, I developed strong interpersonal skills from these team works with many people with different backgrounds.
  • One notable experience is an project I joined in 2013, from which I learned how an industry project performance and I have succeeded of my part which was modeling and optimization by physical simulation software.
  • The enclosed resume provides you with an overview of my experience and my skills.
  • I would welcome the opportunity to meet with you and discuss my qualifications for a vacancy position at {}.
  • I look forward to hearing from you soon.

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    • I am a graduate from UPMC 2013 with a Master’s degree in Science of Engineering, specialty in Energy and Mechanics.
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    • Two years study in France has given me exceptional opportunities to broaden my vision through a wide-variety of courses and different culture.
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    • Throughout my research studies, I applied these knowledge in the projects taking during this education (such as Compressed Air Energy Storage, ventilation system and offshore energy).
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    • More importantly, I developed strong interpersonal skills from these team works with many people with different backgrounds.
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    • One notable experience is an project I joined in 2013, from which I learned how an industry project performance and I have succeeded of my part which was modeling and optimization by physical simulation software.
      투표하세요!
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