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Ride My Bike
Hello...
Everyone My Name is Fitra Sugiyono I want to tell story about my experience riding a bicycle with my friends last saturday We start In The Morning at 6:00 AM and we meet at a McDonald.
After we meet we check our bicycle and start ride.
We ride trough the mountain and a new route.
It's my first time ride my bike to the mountain because usualy I Just ride to around the city.
A lot of something new that I found in that on the route.
I Found a beatitul few of a maountain and pine tree, a fresh air, river, and new friends in the way to the mountain

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- Ride My Bike
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- Hello...
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- Everyone My Name is Fitra Sugiyono I want to tell story about my experience riding a bicycle with my friends last saturday We start In The Morning at 6:00 AM and we meet at a McDonald.
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- After we meet we check our bicycle and start ride.
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- We ride trough the mountain and a new route.
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문장 5
- It's my first time ride my bike to the mountain because usualy I Just ride to around the city.
  투표하세요!
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- A lot of something new that I found in that on the route.
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문장 7
- I Found a beatitul few of a maountain and pine tree, a fresh air, river, and new friends in the way to the mountain
  투표하세요!
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