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My Sunday in May
Hello, I go talking about my sunday !
Weather was beautiful.
Sun arrives and it's really a pleasure to feel it on my skin.
Today, i have done a football party.
I'm referee, a difficult job when we know the attitude of some players because some partys are very important for the ranking !
The ninety minutes was great.
It's the end of the championship, so no challenge in this game, even if I'm young and I' not at ease to ahead protests of players.
A frustrating thing : the odor of BBQ ! Oh my god...
Not easy to resist in this heat.
But ultimately, at the end of the game, we ate sausages.
P.S : Thank you for your correction

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- My Sunday in May
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- Hello, I go talking about my sunday !
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- Weather was beautiful.
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- Sun arrives and it's really a pleasure to feel it on my skin.
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- Today, i have done a football party.
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- I'm referee, a difficult job when we know the attitude of some players because some partys are very important for the ranking !
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- The ninety minutes was great.
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- It's the end of the championship, so no challenge in this game, even if I'm young and I' not at ease to ahead protests of players.
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- A frustrating thing : the odor of BBQ ! Oh my god...
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- Not easy to resist in this heat.
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- But ultimately, at the end of the game, we ate sausages.
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- P.S : Thank you for your correction
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