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  • my motivation letter for a programme

  • First of all, it is the world’s leading electricity producer.
  • No matter in nucleur power generation or new energy, such as wind power generation.
  • Then, I very appreciate the company culture of your company.
  • I have participated in the Talents Fair last December in Shanghai and it really impressed me when the young talents were talking about their experiences.
  • You provide lots of opportunities for training and development and I can see that they’re growing up with the company.
  • It is the second raison I choose this programme and I think it is very important.
  • Finally, I am specialty in energy and I consult the programme details in the website and learned that mechanical scheme is about cooling water system, turbine support and others which are what I have learned during my master and I can make good use of my knowledge.
  • That’s why I decided to choose this programme and this scheme

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

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    • I have participated in the Talents Fair last December in Shanghai and it really impressed me when the young talents were talking about their experiences.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • You provide lots of opportunities for training and development and I can see that they’re growing up with the company.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
  • câu 7
    • Finally, I am specialty in energy and I consult the programme details in the website and learned that mechanical scheme is about cooling water system, turbine support and others which are what I have learned during my master and I can make good use of my knowledge.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8