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Text from linny123 - English

  • Introduce myself

  • My name is Ying.
  • I got my master degree in major of energy and environment at UPMC last year.
  • During my first professional experience, I participated in a industry project to study the thermal, optical properties and made model of automotive lighting systems, I learned how an industry project carried out.
  • I am hardworking, desire to learn and have a creative mind.
  • I appreciate the organizational culture of your company, it provides lots of opportunities for training and development.
  • I desire to inject my knowledge and background to your group.
  • I hope that after this program, I could join your ***department and continue to improve my work skills and experience.
  • Several years later, I wish to be one of the leaders in the China zone, increase the energy market share and also improve the economic development in China.

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