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Taekwondo
Where I have learned in the 1 class we made an announcement on Taekwondo.Me learned instructor I have reached white belt then yellow, green and blue.On Taekwondo I gone 6 years.

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- Where I have learned in the 1 class we made an announcement on Taekwondo.Me learned instructor I have reached white belt then yellow, green and blue.On Taekwondo I gone 6 years.
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