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  • Pros and Cons of Work and Study at Home

  • In the modern society high-tech technology were taken an important place and became significantly vital among people.
  • However, this is not only gave to the human the ability to work and study at home, but also could become common among in the future.
  • This essay is going to discuss possible consequence of that as well as pros and cons for society.
  • There is no doubt that a computer became the major part of humans lives, because it helps people do whatever they want at home rather than going out for working or study.
  • Nevertheless, some employers or teachers get less control for their employees or students.
  • As a result, it sometimes can decrease quality of involvement of that people in process of creating positive results such as good work or solid knowledge.
  • For instance, a person is working at home be able not to do that he have to do, so instead of working he or she are just watching TV.
  • So, in some cases, work at home is not as good as it could be in offices or classes with strict control.
  • On the other hand, working or studying at home is helping a society with twenty-one century problems such as traffic jams and overcrowded.
  • For example, a person, which works at home, dose not spend time for commuting and, this way, he or she creates less traffic activity, so it can reduce traffic jams in a big cities.
  • In case of the study at home, school or university can take more students, so more people have the ability to get education for better life.
  • Therefore, in the future it becomes much more popular among members of a society.
  • To conclude, there are positive and negative sides of studying or working at home, however in my opinion, remove appearance as a worker or a student gets more and more popular in the modern society.

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    • However, this is not only gave to the human the ability to work and study at home, but also could become common among in the future.
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    • There is no doubt that a computer became the major part of humans lives, because it helps people do whatever they want at home rather than going out for working or study.
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    • As a result, it sometimes can decrease quality of involvement of that people in process of creating positive results such as good work or solid knowledge.
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    • For instance, a person is working at home be able not to do that he have to do, so instead of working he or she are just watching TV.
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    • On the other hand, working or studying at home is helping a society with twenty-one century problems such as traffic jams and overcrowded.
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    • For example, a person, which works at home, dose not spend time for commuting and, this way, he or she creates less traffic activity, so it can reduce traffic jams in a big cities.
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    • In case of the study at home, school or university can take more students, so more people have the ability to get education for better life.
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    • To conclude, there are positive and negative sides of studying or working at home, however in my opinion, remove appearance as a worker or a student gets more and more popular in the modern society.
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