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You are right.
It is useless to work like crazy if we can't enjoy our lives. It's pathetic.
I think it's one of bad customs from the korean tradition born of industrialisaition which is made very rapidly in the 1970s.
It should be changed.
So I prefer not to return to my country... lol I In fact, many western companies in Korea respect their working conditions(They don't work as crazy korean companies Xp).
So it would be a good idea to find a place there.

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- You are right.
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- It is useless to work like crazy if we can't enjoy our lives. It's pathetic.
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- I think it's one of bad customs from the korean tradition born of industrialisaition which is made very rapidly in the 1970s.
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- It should be changed.
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- So I prefer not to return to my country... lol I In fact, many western companies in Korea respect their working conditions(They don't work as crazy korean companies Xp).
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- So it would be a good idea to find a place there.
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