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an interesting Sunday
Today i work overtime alone.
When i was boring in show room, an elegant guy came and his graceful smile made me feel interesting. i showed him some products' information and he left quickly but he've changed my day.
Thank that guy so much.

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- an interesting Sunday
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- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Τίτλος
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- Today i work overtime alone.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 1
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- When i was boring in show room, an elegant guy came and his graceful smile made me feel interesting. i showed him some products' information and he left quickly but he've changed my day.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 2
Πρόταση 3
- Thank that guy so much.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 3