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Hi everybody!
I just want to practice my English, because haven't speak around five years ago with no body in English, so perhaps is going to be hard to correct me.
Yesterday i saw a soccer game with my brother and his fiance.
It was very fun, we ate grill and drinked beer.
I thonk not to say but for me is har DC not to say the Real Madrid like a champion again is not right.
Because that five minutes extension that they recive has been to much for that game it was a cool and easy game.
So I think the game fid not deserve five minutes extension and in those five minutes Real Madrid toke the cup.
Every person is free to think wath they want but some things are in thd way they are.

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- I just want to practice my English, because haven't speak around five years ago with no body in English, so perhaps is going to be hard to correct me.
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- Yesterday i saw a soccer game with my brother and his fiance.
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- It was very fun, we ate grill and drinked beer.
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- I thonk not to say but for me is har DC not to say the Real Madrid like a champion again is not right.
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- Because that five minutes extension that they recive has been to much for that game it was a cool and easy game.
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- So I think the game fid not deserve five minutes extension and in those five minutes Real Madrid toke the cup.
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- Every person is free to think wath they want but some things are in thd way they are.
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