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Dear Aubrey!
Happy birthday from Russia!
Remain as beautiful and kind, as you are now.
Liza sends you her regards too.

oliksMay 2014100% GOOD (1 votes)
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标题
- Dear Aubrey!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Happy birthday from Russia!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Remain as beautiful and kind, as you are now.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Liza sends you her regards too.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3