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my birthday
Today is my birthday, and I haved work because I 'm military.
In my job don't understand these wishes.
But I want continue my evolution and is with my family, they're all my world and everything for me.
Tomorrow is a new day, with bright and hope.

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- my birthday
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문장 1
- Today is my birthday, and I haved work because I 'm military.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- In my job don't understand these wishes.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- But I want continue my evolution and is with my family, they're all my world and everything for me.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- Tomorrow is a new day, with bright and hope.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4