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my day
Hello!
Today I have gone to my work by bus.
After, in the afternoon, I have return to my home about three o'clock, and I studyed my english book.
English language is very important for me, because it is very important for work and for travel, and because I want learn new language for me.
Have good evening, and have good dinner. Bye bye

lalla89May 2014100% GOOD (1 votes)
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- my day
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- Hello!
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- Today I have gone to my work by bus.
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- After, in the afternoon, I have return to my home about three o'clock, and I studyed my english book.
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- English language is very important for me, because it is very important for work and for travel, and because I want learn new language for me.
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- Have good evening, and have good dinner. Bye bye
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