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My family
Although I have really very goods friends, I love spending time with my family.
Over all with my parents and my sister.
The main reason of this fact is that they are very special to me.
In fact, I consider them how my main support.
Some people prefer to spend time with their friends rather than with family, but this is not my case.
And of course that I have good friends.
For instance, I like to do a lot of things with my mother such as go shopping, go to the gym, swim, take a sunbathe, ...
In the case of my father, I can spend a good time with him cycling, walking or cooking.
And in case of my sister I love her.
She is very special to me...

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- Although I have really very goods friends, I love spending time with my family.
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- Over all with my parents and my sister.
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- The main reason of this fact is that they are very special to me.
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句子 4
- In fact, I consider them how my main support.
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句子 5
- Some people prefer to spend time with their friends rather than with family, but this is not my case.
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- And of course that I have good friends.
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- For instance, I like to do a lot of things with my mother such as go shopping, go to the gym, swim, take a sunbathe, ...
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- In the case of my father, I can spend a good time with him cycling, walking or cooking.
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- And in case of my sister I love her.
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句子 10
- She is very special to me...
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 10